A few good editors

I've been meaning to post this picture that Ann sent me recently - an excerpt from one of her accounting textbooks. She sent it to me with the email title, "The world still needs a few good editors," and made sure to circle what I was supposed to see...
For some reason I can't make this photo be right-side up, but it was important that you see it anyway, so here you go.

Now, I'm assuming that no accountant deals with the pubic interest, and that this poor author was just simply under-edited. Or perhaps Ann and I are both sadly mistaken and she has yet to truly learn the ins and outs of her chosen profession. And if that's the case, let's hope said accountant would be over-compensated for his time.